O, that you were yourself! but, love, you are
No longer yours than you yourself here live:
Against this coming end you should prepare,
And your sweet semblance to some other give.
So should that beauty which you hold in lease
Find no determination: then you were
Yourself again after yourself's decease,
When your sweet issue your sweet form should bear.
Who lets so fair a house fall to decay,
Which husbandry in honour might uphold
Against the stormy gusts of winter's day
And barren rage of death's eternal cold?
O, none but unthrifts: -- Dear my love, you
know
You had a father; let your son say so.
1. Yourself.
The Quarto of 1609, in accordance with the usage of the time, gives "your
selfe" as two words. This allows of an emphasis being thrown on the
"your," which seems here required; the sense in all probability
being, "O that you were truly your own possession!" Cf. "another
self,"Sonnet X; "next self," Sonnet CXXXIII 6.
5. Lease.
Mr. W. H. is a leaseholder of his comely form, not a freeholder.
6. Determination.
In accordance with common legal phraseology.
7. Yourself.
Q. has "You selfe."
8. Sweet
issue -- sweet form. The employment of "sweet," here and
elsewhere in these Sonnets, however much out of harmony with present usage, was
in accord with the custom of the times. The same word, for example, is used of
the Earl of Pembroke (W. H.) by John Davies of Hereford in his Witte's
Pilgrimage: "So so (sweete Lord) so should it bee," &c.
9. So
fair a house must be referred to Mr. W. H.'s ancestry, not to the
bodily house ("beauteous roof" of Sonnet X). The words might be very well
used of an eldest son and heir, even though he might not be an only son.
10-12.
Due care and attention might preserve the house against the storms of winter,
the cold blasts of death.
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